A poem what do you think
If you can understand it, especially the last line, then congrats, coz i think it makes no sense - particularly the last line - made sense to me then after writing it i realised that actually it didn't. but i don't know what to change it to.
The line was drawn,
You ignored it,
So i replaced it sevenfold upon me.
Strawberry gashes bleed me,
A scarlet map of pain.
Find the lines,
Find my veins,
Then cut them with my pain.
Red emotion dripping out
Blood and tears mix again.
That's all i'm worth, this pain.
Slicing flesh
And shredding hearts,
This blackened hell's torn me apart.
But there's beauty in this pain,
Poppies flower at wounds again.
Answer:I love it!...
Alot of people dont understand these sort of things but this poem goes deep into the explanation!...The way the words express the feelings grab the attention and the emotions of the reader...
And as for the last line it does make sense...It enlightens the ending of the poem in a strange way!
Great poet!...
And i would just like to say that the people who label "self-harmers" as attention seekers are ignorant and extremely narrow minded...These are the people that society shouldnt have time for...
Take care x Stay safe :)
i luv it ooohhh its superb xxxxxxxxx
yeah that confuses me.
*gasp*